Poetry

[Damien Obsidius]

not much serious topics 'round these days, so i thought of this. a topic of poetry, where tales are told and poems shown. i might post some of my very own poems when i have time but for now, some by ''purple ronnie'' will do.

"i hate getting up in the morning
and doing my work every day
i'd rather stay in and watch the telly
or eat loads of chocolates and play"

"exams and tests and things like that
are really rather rotten
i'd rather fall in camel poo
or eat my best friend's bottom"

"i sometimes find it rather hard
to say i realy care
and that i like you quite a lot
but i've said it now-so there"

[Lord of Hordes]

Here's one of my own, from back when I was a a member on a different forum years ago. I saved all my poems from that poetry thread, because I was voted as the top poet on the forum.

TREADING TO DEATH

Like a storm in my mind, I'm confused
The rain never ceases, I am drowning
So many things that go unanswered
And the levy breaks in time
Mud curls up between my toes
As I wade through murk and mire
It's been storming,it seems, forever
And there's no escaping this flood of mine

I can't tread this water forever
You live in lakes and rivers
And it seems so beautiful to me
Your water is peaceful and still
And all I can do is make waves
And trouble your peaceful existence
The rain follows me into your world
With thunder and chill

And that look on your face
Makes the rain beat down harder
It tears at me like razors
And exposes my inner being
And all that pours out from within
Is the distorted thoughts that drown me
It's so cold, that I can't even feel
This strife is killing me. I am drowning.

[Damien Obsidius]

one i wrote just now
[shadow=black,left,300]Pain[/shadow]
In the twilight i lay thinking
of a girl, that broke my heart
of how much i still love her
and to think that, it is hard

it feels like a stone upon my chest
a burden, a weight, i got no rest
i could only fool myself for so long
close to crying at every heard love song

out of all this i got realy shy
why, i ask myself, why?
i just can't face rejection again
can't talk to a girl, like a real man
that someone out there could make me happy again
just didn't believe it

more attachment leads just to more pain
was the idea now formed in my brain
but this pain wasn't just pain
it destroyed me

[Lord of Hordes]

Here's another one of mine:

For Lauren

Hark, I tell you,
Harken well
For I have
A tale to tell.

There was a girl
A "sonic vision"
To me she was
An inspiration

Then one day
She turned on me
I know not what
I did to she

To make her lash out
Violently
Spitting, slapping
Yelling at me

I said she was nice
And weird as well
Shortly after,
She started to yell

She made me feel
As though I was
A mindless fool
And just because

I couldn't, wouldn't
Understand
How "weird" and "normal"
Go hand in hand

I'm not sorry
No, not an ounce
We disagree
This I announce

Never shall it
Ever be
The same between
I and she

Even though
I need a friend
I have nothing
With which to mend

The damage that's
Been done today
It took mere hours
To throw away

What could have been
A friendship true
I'd really like to
Make it new

But, I fear
All hope is lost
For, mending this
There is a cost

The price to pay
It is our pride
"Hark, I tell you,
Hark", I cried

[SDO]

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
i accidentally edite my post while iw anted to post it *cries*

now the other poem is gone, LoH, any way to retrieve it? i have a written version, but it was a bit different...

[Lord of Hordes]

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Your poem is gone
Sucks to be you




Sorry, this is a poetry thread....I couldn't resist.

[123prince]

LMFAO LoH, That was truly Epic.

[Zeo 3 4 3]

roses are red,
and violets are orange,
now if i could only think
of something besides door hinge

[jatrix]

The mist is rising
Your heart is pounding
Your breath is vising
Your eyes cannot decide where to go...

Night is coming
Your pulse is speeding
Fear is homing
into you...

You will not know
what to do
when it hits...
It can't be here yet...

There it is
Over there
Do you see it?
It's coming for you

The world is spinning
Your sight is dulling
You can't here a thing...
Is it here?

No one's beside you
You're alone
Nothing will protect you
or hold it back

Everything's... gone
your life is gone
your essence is dead
yourself, you, have been terminated

It is here
And it's work... is done.
You... are gone.

Read it faster each line you go, but on "Everything's...gone" slow down to a normal pace until done.

[Lord of Hordes]

Cool poem Jartix
I like it a lot
Post some more
Let's see what you've got